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Chico
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-03-26 05:01 PM

THE FLOWER !

So there I sit;
   With a flower in my hand.
As I slowly write;
   Her name in the sand...
I'm playing the game;
   I played as a tot;
Chanting she loves me.
   She loves me not.
But this time it's not for the girl;
   With freckles on her face
But for the one I love;
   The one my dreams chase.

So I'm asking the flower;
   If Avei loves me;
cause I don't have the power;
   To ask her myself.

And For once the flower;
   Tells me yes;
So I decide to ask her,
   To get rid of this stress.
But the next time I see her;
   My heart begins to race.
And I can't bring myself,
   to look her in the face
So I pass her by;
   Without a word;
Without a try;
   My whole body trembles;
my heart begins to cry.
   The anger rises within.
And I ask myself why.
   I see my dreams fading
And my courage begins to die.
   I feel I am trading;
the truth for a lie.

  The lie that tells me.
That she doesn't care.
   And that if I asked her;
I would just get a stare

But I don't want to be a fool;
   And let my dreams die.
So I think I'll give it;
   At least one more try;
So pray for me;
   that I'll get the courage;
To make her see.
   That I love her.
I love her dearly...

                                   -CHICO

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-03-26 05:42 PM

Chico,
Touching poem. You will never know what love will be without first taking the chance to share it....after all we must give it away to feel it in return. I hope you find the courage to see if she feels the same. Good Luck!!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-03-26 05:49 PM

Just so you know, this poem has been deleted from the Challenge Forum, the Teen Forum, the Dark Forum, the Critical Analysis Forum and the Feelings Forum. Please don't post the same poem in mulitiple forums....you have a better chance of having it read if you stick to one forum. Thanks Chico!

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 03-26-2000).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-03-26 09:38 PM

Chico~
Wow ... in your exuberance to find an answer, you sure covered all the bases, huh?
Now ... be a good fellow and TELL HER what you told all of us !

Wonderful thoughts .. NOW tell her.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-03-26 10:48 PM

Chico, this poem is full of wonderful sentiments.. and we're glad to have you posting here in Open....

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2000-03-26 11:12 PM

*Sending courage your way*...may you find it soon!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-03-27 10:27 AM

Show her this poem and you'll find need for no other words

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-03-27 02:45 PM

I loved the softness of this poem...it almost made me cry...but Chico get up your courage...be her friend...and then see what happens. James

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