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There He Was Singing Before Me (I have the answer to the mystery now)
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There He Was Singing Before Me (I have the answer to the mystery now) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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There He Was Singing Before Me There he was singing before me with his country voice words grabbing me caressing my every inch with song my half shut eyes opened and focused on the television there singing this song was a man I sweetly just watched Words grabbing me caressing my every inch with song lost in his world of music I soared through skies of delight for just a moment dreaming of being his object of affection knowing in a few minutes the song over and reality reigns My half shut eyes opened and focused on the television he did something to my senses rode them away gallantly just simple words strung in rhythm with simple acoustics had me dining in his graceful sound for the minutes ahead Knowing in a few minutes the song over and reality reigns yet my mind desires more fulfillment from this sole artist my eyes open and searching for what I possessed for him there he was singing before me with his country voice [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Who? Which singer? What song? LOL This is good...  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very descriptive, Lost Dreamer. I enjoyed the read. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Oh, my goodness ... I like this one bunches ! 'he did something to my senses rode them away gallantly' Brilliant image here. Sure sent my senses galloping ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Poet deVine: When I figure it out I will let you know, I was distracted right at the end of the video and could not catch the details, and believe me I am going crazy, thank you for reading, glad you liked it. Elizabeth: Thank you kindly, glad you enjoyed. Marge: Thanks for reading, glad you were able to feel the feelings, now I'm going back hunting for this vocal artist. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You going crazy ? Good thing I wasn't around !  Another good on Gloria ! How do you do it ? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, I do know what you mean with those country boys...they are special, huh? great prose here, brought back some memories that time took away. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This makes me want to hear him too..... who, who, who??? |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
He seems to have made a great impact on you! Wonderful poem, Gloria! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
LD, Who is the mysterious man that can do these things?? I do relate to how he made you feel. There are a few that make me fel the same way. Great writing!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - sounds like you were swept away there, Gloria. It's amazing the power of music combined with television... I used to wait all day for a Lita Ford video to come on MTV when I was like 16 or 17...LOL My first true love I think - a woman who could play guitar too. That's all I was lookin at too, I swear. Sorry for the nostalgic moment... But thanks, your poem carried me back. michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Munda: Still crazy after all these hours...LOL Thank you glad you liked it passing shadows: Yes I am coming to find that out as I watch this music channel waiting to hear and see him again...LOL Thanks for reading glad you could return to your memories. Nan, As soon as I know all of you will know and we can all go visit him together...LOL dsnyder: Oh yes, amazingly so maybe I should send him this poem when I find him...LOL Lone Wolf: Thank You, and yes one of those unexplainable things. Michael: Was I that obvious...LOL Thanks for reading and responding and glad I refreshed your memory of days gone by. I am in a real crazy mood right now so if some of my responses sound obnoctious I am sorry, I don't mean them that way I'm just really in a grand mood. Could it be the mystery singer or am I just crazy...LOL Don't ask Munda she'll tell you I'm nuts. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem! Yes, I know a lot about the impact music can have on one's life. I couldn't get through a day without listening to at least one beautiful song, and after all, songs are just poems set to music... good songs are, anyway! Anyway, keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughing here...boy, he did get to you didn't he? Perhaps we can see him in concert together |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 Figger it out yet?? [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Amazing how a song can do that to ya. Or was it more the amazement of the person  Whatever it was, you've written that out well, touched and awed. Great one, I love it! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
LoveBug:Thank You very much, I don't often listen to country music, but I think I have found a new inspiration. Ruth: I would love to go see him in concert with you, i hope we get front row tickets, no forget that, then I would have a hard time keeping myself off the stage...LOL Nan, Sorry, I think I was asleep when he would have been on, but I will figure it out sooner or later. Rebecca: It was his music first then the words and last but not least his looks just swept me away and there was no coming back or so I wish...LOL Thanks for enjoying and your kind words. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I have had the same thing happen to me--amazing, the power of music. Wonderful poem! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Shania Twain does it for me everytime. Great poem. This poem touched a note with all of us I believe. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Martie: Thank You, and yes music has magic touches at times. Danny: Thank You very much, I'm still trying to figure out who it is, and it figures the song is never on when I'm listening...LOL maybe I was dreaming, oh I hope not...LOL |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I have the artist now the mystery is over... Oh yea, some inquiring minds here want to know too. O.K. ready: Clay Davidson, and the song is: Unconditional |
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