Open Poetry #6 |
Sometimes |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I’m sitting here thinking of you I know that sometimes It doesn’t seem that I love you And that you think I don’t care sometimes Here I am waiting for you It gets me through the day Looking forward to seeing you Even though I sometimes Should love you by staying away And when I hear you say those words About ending the whole thing, I pretend I never heard Those words, that kill sometimes, Because you are everything |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
The only good thing about disagreement in a relationship...is the making up part!! Hope things get better for you soon! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
THIS IS ME ALL MIXED UP. "IM SITTING HERE THINKING OF YOU" <==ME AND SOMETIMES I DONT THINK HE LOVES ME AND DONT CARE. WHOLE SECOND VERSE ME. "AND WHEN YOU SAY THE WORDS ABOUT ENDING THE WHOLE THING" I TRIED SAYIN THEM HE ACTED LIKE HE DIDNT HEAR THEM BUT IT KILLED ME TO SAY THEM. "BECAUSE YOU ARE EVERYTHING" HE IS EVERYTHING TO ME VERY NICE POEM THANX FOR WRITING IT. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Can totally relate to the words you've spoken here. "Even though I sometimes Should love you by staying away" That's exactly how I feel - and yet the person you're staying away from is your whole life, too. Hit home hard with this one. michael |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Cool, thanks Michael. Just another... Thanks, its nice to see another viewpoint. I never thought of it that way. Devina, This was written in 93 and is an old one like pretty much most of my posts. Everything got better....we got married. |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
That is what most of us try to do, ignore the hurting words of rejection. It is like telling someone, u are not a good enough of a person for me. I don't want u, (almost as if saying die out of my life.) "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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