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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Rapture walks with ghosts alone despite the fear I've come to possess. Wake my heart in bitter silence. It's you, (isn't it) for whom my loving heart beats? Why then now, do I wish to dance far away and in some distant hall, where hope, not pain, keeps me knowing it's you, I'm sure, it's you? Christine.....with love? Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Why then now, do I wish to dance far away and in some distant hall, where hope, not pain, keeps me knowing ---------------- Chris, this poem is so full of your sweetness...I LOVE this one. its perfect. "Christine.....with love?" ... yes, I do believe so...(smile) dont let your doubts own you...enjoy the dance...  take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Christine...the indecision is so obvious in this work. Nicely written  |
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