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In Candle's Flicker
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In Candle's Flicker |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I sit here staring at your picture I sing to you and tell you what I cannot bring myself to for all I have left is the memory of you and this picture I place upon my shelf beside your candle burning hoping it burns forever I smile,  for there you are, smiling back at me well at least I have that Maree 2000 < !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sadly touching and beautiful, Dark Angel. Very lovely. Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Maree....this is so sad :{ big hugs to you my friend |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
I have to go and get a tissue.. Very sad and moving poem, Dark Angel - great work. "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, DarkAngel~ This is so pretty. It needs a beautiful title .. May I suggest 'In Candle's Flicker' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
no words just....... (((((((hugebigwarmhuggs))))))) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Adding my hugs to Moonshines... K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise, thank you so very much ----------------- Thanks Ruth, need them *hugs back*----------------- VampDude,thank you you're so sweet ----------------- Marge Honey, that is a beautiful title, I'd love to use it for my poem thank you, I'l lask one of the moderators to arrange it for me Thanks so very much for your lovely reply ----------------- Moonshine honey thanks *hugs*----------------- Sweet butterfly, thank you hon. *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Beautiful ... back to the top for another trip ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Angel, I'm speechless. You've been writing some real sad poems here as of late. I have to admit there pretty darn good ones too! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
One can just feel the sadness that you've written into this piece. ~ Claire |
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