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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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0 posted 2000-03-25 07:44 AM


I sit here
  staring at your
picture
  I sing to you
and tell you
what I cannot
bring myself to

for all I
   have left
is the memory
of you and
  this picture

I place upon
my shelf beside
   your candle
     burning
   hoping it burns
forever

I smile,  
    for there you
are, smiling back
at me

well at least
I have that


Maree
2000

< !signature-->

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 03-26-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-25 08:28 AM


This is so sadly touching and beautiful, Dark Angel. Very lovely.

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-25 10:14 AM


Oh Maree....this is so sad :{
big hugs to you my friend

VampDude
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since 2000-03-24
Posts 21
Canada
3 posted 2000-03-25 09:29 PM


I have to go and get a tissue.. Very sad and moving poem, Dark Angel - great work.

 "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-03-25 09:57 PM


Oh, DarkAngel~
This is so pretty.
It needs a beautiful title ..
May I suggest
'In Candle's Flicker'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
Posts 265
Australia
5 posted 2000-03-26 12:21 PM


no words just.......
(((((((hugebigwarmhuggs)))))))

Severn
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6 posted 2000-03-26 02:30 AM


Adding my hugs to Moonshines...

K

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2000-03-26 06:06 AM


Denise, thank you so very much  
-----------------
Thanks Ruth, need them   *hugs back*
-----------------
VampDude,thank you you're so sweet  
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Marge Honey, that is a beautiful title, I'd love to use it for my poem   thank you, I'l lask one of the moderators  to arrange it for me   Thanks so very much for your lovely reply  
-----------------
Moonshine honey thanks   *hugs*
-----------------
Sweet butterfly, thank you hon. *hugs*  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
8 posted 2000-03-27 01:03 PM


DarkAngel~
Beautiful ...
back to the top for another trip !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
9 posted 2000-03-27 08:26 PM


Angel, I'm speechless. You've been writing some real sad poems here as of late.  I have to admit there pretty darn good ones too!
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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10 posted 2000-03-27 08:53 PM


One can just feel the sadness that you've written into this piece.

~ Claire

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