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What doesnt kill me now
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What doesnt kill me now |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Whats the solution For my insanity Its my new years revolution To forget and move on One eighth of my life on this earth Was spent in love with you Desperately searching for some form of rebirth To no avail, I find emptyness What doesnt kill me now Can only make me stronger But I often I question how I will survive through this But then I think... I can handle this After all I am a man So I leave you with a quote From a favorite emo band "and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me..." Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, yes, I've been there too. Good quote. Deep, strong poem. I especially like the lines: "What doesnt kill me now Can only make me stronger". ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Somehow poetry and embracing the truth help us to move on...very clear writing. James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whats the solution For my insanity Its my new years revolution To forget and move on One eighth of my life on this earth Was spent in love with you Desperately searching for some form of rebirth -------------------- this poem is exceptionally well written, you have expressed your emotions in this with a grace that touched me as I read it... the last line quote was a perfect ending... sweetly ironic and so true. very nice work. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Thanks Rosemarie, James, Janet Its been quite a while now and I am slowly recovering, But I still seem to write poems about her. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucius I've been there to and it's a tough ride, eventually I forgave but i've never forgotten I don't think you ever do. Loved your poem Tracie LoL Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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