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I'm Giving Up!!!
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I'm Giving Up!!! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I'm Giving Up!!! I've been riding horseback through this place watching the beautiful scenery evolve naturally meeting and greeting new faces along the way a thrill that I have enjoyed yet now it's changed Watching the beautifully scenery evolve naturally enjoying every minute of creative hand made art contributing my poetic creativity to the scenery now the time has come I feel alone and very lost Meeting and greeting new faces along the way gave me such joy and peacefulness in my life sad to think this horse won't ride here anymore tears drip as I wonder why my name is shunned A thrill that I have enjoyed yet now has changed seems my abilities to create are not the same so I'm giving up joy and peace of all the months I've been riding horseback through this place. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gloria - Whatchu talkin'bout??... You know the rule of horseback riding, though - Right?? When you fall off - You have to get right back up and climb on for another ride... It's the rule..  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Give that horse some oats! Saddle up, missy and ride like the wind...right back here.  |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Lost Dreamer, I know it's hard to pick yourself up...but please, do it. You are loved and greatly admired here. Do what ever makes you happy, and the way your 'tears drip' I think you are better off here honey.  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sorry the horse threw me to the ground I came to and so blinded were my eyes seeing some kind of delusional thoughts sent me riding away lost into the sunset I came to and so blinded were my eyes trying to send me off somewhere alone so far from the people here at Passions that give me a home to share with them Seeing some kind of delusional thoughts I followed unknowing the path they had set my horse he followed no argument from him as I became lost in a furying fight of illusion Sent me riding away lost into the sunset slowly my mind was refreshing the truth that where I belong is where it all began sorry the horse threw me to the ground |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
Well Done!  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gloria NEVER give up! That's too easy, and you're loved here. It's a beautiful gift you share with us in your writing, so you keep sharing it. I can relate to how you're feeling, but you hang in there! New faces, new crowd, getting busy in here it is...but this is home where we know each other, and there's no place like it. How could we possibly do without your caring, loving nature around here? Ride the tide and conquer! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Don't you give up, that's not the way to go Climb back each time into that saddle high Hold high your head and take breaths deep and slow And write those poems that can make me *sigh*. You have a talent that's beyond compare You write with such an eloquence and grace You have so many friends here that do care Who'd miss you so if you left Passions Place. DON'T YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT LEAVING, GLORIA!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gloria..you know what you do when you get thrown off right? Get right back up on it and try again. Happy Trails to you my friend, but make sure they're only around passions  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
G~L~O~R~I~A Oh won't you stayyyy just a little bit longer...please, please, please say you will~~ I love reading your work. I haven't a clue about the personal matters you've referred to, and frankly it's none of my business, but I do know that sharing poetry is good for the soul. I hope you stay, dear poet. (((you)))~ Claire |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Justin Kace you didn't know, your writing is a wonderful expression of who you are! Wha' happened? You been hanging out in the 'stute too long, I think... perhaps you've flipped! LOL Seriously, Gloria, whatever it is that caused you to write this poem.... forget about it... Give it up! Hang around, kiddo! Your writing has improved tremendously within the past few months. I love to watch a writer growing like that. Very bad time to drop the pen...  doreen |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
RELAX, you all can't get rid of me that easy, it would be like running away from home sweet home. Where would my mind have to release all this creative energy. Forgive me for my insanity for I lost conciousness with my mind, but I'm back together again...LOL |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! Well that's a relief!! Glad to hear you are staying!!  Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
miss lost i got no pun for the relief i got this was an evolvin poem that turned out well yuhuyuhyuyuyhuy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Gosh darn it ! I read this post this morning ... and all day I stewed over the perfect response ... now you've come to your senses and my well-crafted response no longer has merit. (think I'm kidding? I went back and counted all of the poems you'd posted in the last 45 days and the # of responses you received and the ratio of posts to replies and not only that ..... I HATE MATH ... but I did it for YOU !) And I just burned it ! Silly girl ... you know you'd never be able to run far enough to hide from this family of friends .... why we'd have your picture posted in all major browser windows in nothing flat ! Whew ! Now smile that smile and get busy ! RIDING LESSONS START TOMORROW ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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