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Mel~
Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16
Gosford, New South Wales, Australia

0 posted 2000-03-24 01:17 AM


Love and hate,
Despair and loss.
If there is a price for living
That is the cost.
You cannot avoid these things.
No, you cannot hide.
Some of those come from outside yourself
The others, from inside.
If you do not experience these things
Your life will not be full.
It's the experiences that make who you are.
Unless you want to live in a bubble.
If you are having a bad time and want to die
Just hold on a little longer
It's getting past the bad times
That can help make us stronger.



© Copyright 2000 Melinda O'Connor - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-24 01:31 AM



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Love and hate,
Despair and loss.
If there is a price for living
That is the cost.
You cannot avoid these things.
No, you cannot hide.
Some of those come from outside yourself
The others, from inside.
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this is GREAT...perfect rhyme flow...and words of wisdom as well...
very good.
take care jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-24 01:56 AM


Thank You for those comforting words.  


take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Mel~
Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16
Gosford, New South Wales, Australia
3 posted 2000-03-24 01:59 AM


Thank you Janet Marie!
Mel~
Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16
Gosford, New South Wales, Australia
4 posted 2000-03-24 02:00 AM


Broken Wings, I'm glad they could be of comfort to you
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-03-24 03:09 AM


there is a fine line between the two (Love and Hate) sometimes it's hard not to cross it in our struggles  
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