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Decadence |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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DECADENCE The vision comes in the night, Two wrongs that make a right. The sun hidden behind a light Within a shadow. If you open up the door, You find just what you're lookin' for. The echoes cry for evermore For coming home. Still, we walk along that line, Where the sun ceases to shine... Giving nod to the decline Of our demeanor. Till, alas, we sail the sea In search of things never to be. Where, in darkness, we find the key, But ne'er the answer. The echoes cry for evermore For coming home. Michael Anderson |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ah... the prodigal returns... a classic tale... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
The answer has always lain deep within your heart Michael...set it free... Love your night-time pondering my sweet...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hmmm...I know this subject incredibly well! Thank you, m'friend! Beautiful! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Echoes cry - forever more".. That they do, Michael... Nice job, of course..  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully done! I love the style you used in this one.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Got to echo Rebel on this one....nicely done  [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 03-23-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
L.R., LOL - I always make it back sooner or later... devina, My heart is opening once more. I owe that much to you. serenity - kinda can be a touchy subject too, eh? Nan - YES they do... they're like a leaky water faucet at night that won't let you sleep! PdV, LOL - I thought style went out the door on this one... Maybe I should patent this and start a new poetry trend... Ruth, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thank you all for the kind replies. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Indeed. I stand chastened. |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
serenity...LOL now Michael's smiling... |
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