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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Leave behind what has been struck accumulating dust Begin this day un-modeled clay from depth upwardly thrust Mold not to a function assume no given form Resist comfort of the half-life for the fury of the storm Enjoin the elemental in the present you create Stand before the multitude and denounce belief in fate Feel within the strength of those whom none can ever rule Take pride in the possession of those who think you fool |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great Dr.Moose! Every day is a new beginning, isn't it? Another chance to start over and forge our path into the future. Well done! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Leave behind what has been struck accumulating dust Begin this day un-modeled clay from depth upwardly thrust I try to start each day fresh, but sometimes I need those wisdoms learned from all the mistakes of the past. Great poem, Doc! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dr. Moose~ 'assume no given form' Pensively brilliant. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Excellent message, astutely delivered. Good writing, Doc. ~ Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You are a very wise man Dr. Moose  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
O.K. , there really was something I wanted to share here, so I guess if I felt that stongly about it , I'll bump it up ... d, Your replys are always well recieved , thank you Martie , When people start to quote my words back to me , I'm either on another planet or I start to thinking ( both of which are dangerous ) Marge , It's really not that "pensive" or at least I hope not , 'cause I'm already over my credit limit Claire , Speaking of "stute" it's about time I got back ,Thanks for the reply ! hoot' I don't know about a very wise man named Dr. Moose , but I used to know a very wise moose named Dr.Mann .Hmmmm , very interesting ! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. (I am not a wise moose, nor for that matter, a moose, not a doctor either, although I have been called a quack, which might well make me a goose, well...actually a duck, but duck doesn't rhyme with moose, but then quack doesn't rhyme with wise either, which is really beside the point), the point being, I concur with the comments of the ladies. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I do want to clarify the above comment that I truly enjoyed the poem. |
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