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The World I See
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The World I See |
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Mel~ Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16Gosford, New South Wales, Australia |
I lie awake in bed at night I sit up, turn on the light, I pick up the pen and take out the book Write down my thoughts for you to look And begin to understand the way I see The world that is around me I see a world of hurt and pain I wish I never had to see this world again Theres people dying People crying Children starving and nobody seems to care We should put them there in their shoes, See if they would get the blues If they had to live a life Of horror and strife.. This is why I write poetry So you can begin to see the world I see |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
My son and I liked your poem immensely, although it is quite sad. Poetry is a wonderful way to express all emotions. Thank you. David2  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very sad yet well expressed! Denise |
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