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Past The Moonlight
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Past The Moonlight |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Past The Moonlight ~*Marge Tindal*~ I will hold you in my arms when the sun has lost it's light Lay with you and love with you through the longing night Wrapped in throes of ecstasy calling out your name When the morning comes we'll never be the same Loved one come and comfort me when the sun has lost it's light Hold me 'til the dawn breaks don't leave me in the night I'll not ask anything else of you I won't ask for you to stay just let the dawn be breaking before you go away ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Reminds me of a song sung years ago, "Help me make it through the night". Marge, you are a master of poetry and I love to read your responses to poetry others write. Would love to know what program you use to get the great graphics and font styles. Sure adds to your writing. And, thank you for your nice words about my poetry. Danny A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Marge You have a lovely way with words..and i can relate to this one sometimes you want to just hang on to that moment just a little while longer... Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, another beautiful poem by Marge. Why doesn't that surprise me?!!  Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A very passionate.....I tend to see a bit of the kitten with the lion sneaking in for a peak also  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ Thank you for the 'glowing' reply. I guess I see such artistry in the words we all paint ... so I try to throw them on the canvas with color. I will be happy to e-mail you this evening with some basic info on the graphics and 'paint'. Most of what I learned about the how-to's I learned right here in Ron's Help section. Take a moment or two and go there. A wealth of knowledge he has imparted. I will always thank him for challenging me to LEARN how to use the tools that take my words colorfully to the canvas. Tess~ I so appreciate your response. Denise~ I hope I ALWAYS catch you by surprise. Hoot~ Meow ! ..... ROAR !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Marge, I love your work! I adore love poetry and yours is wonderful! I have a question though, is there a limit to the lenght of submitted poems? I have a few rather lengthy ballads and would like to kow if it is permissable to post them here. I did enjoy your poem, thanks. david2 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ Thank you for liking what I write. I think you'll find that love is a very prevelant theme through a lot of my writing. There are many lengthy pieces posted here in the forum. I don't believe you'll find a problem with the length of your ballads. We'd love to see them. If you have any questions .. please feel free to go to the Q&A Forum and post your question. A moderator will be more than happy to assist you. Enjoy ... ~*Marge*` ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
A heartfelt plea Marge...You and this moonlight seem to be good together!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ I could "feel" this one~ You are the best Marge!~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Basking in the poetic glow of the moon! It is a fun moon, huh? Mariee~ Awww ... you know I appreciate the fact that you think so. This one holds a special place in my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is so bittersweet...just a few minutes more. I love this heartfelt work you do. It is always painted so vivdly. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mmmmmmarvelous Marge! But it is only natural to want to lay in bed after a good night's ...sleep? Hugs. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I'll put the coffee on, oh , and how do you like your eggs ( green? ) Doc |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Let me think about this a second. The moon, love, beautiful poetry... yep... I like. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge, That was a very special and moving poem. I really appreciate the feeling it gives me. I can relate to the need for someone special, if only for a little while. I love the atmosphere that you generated. I want you to know that I really enjoyed you post. Have a great day! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, I have no doubts that he will stay I have no doubts we'll see another great poem within the next few hours Love it Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WildChild~ I do appreciate what you see in my poetry. Serenity~ Dr. Moose~ Coffee w/cream Eggs Benedict More coffee ! Mike~ I like that you like ! TerryW~ I appreciate you letting me know how you enjoy what I write. Thank you very much. Welcome to Passion's, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie girl~ You sneaked in there. LOL .... thank you, hon. Now you've gone and done it ... I was going to bed early tonight ... you just woke the muse who wouldn't want to disappoint YOU ! Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice poem,Marge!!!!!!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'd be wanting to stay for breakfast ... let's see ... what have you got ... ... Ohhh! some more of what I just had ... Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Hi hon .. thanks and good to see you. Rex~ LOL ! More coffee ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
"Wrapped in throes of ecstasy calling out your name When the morning comes we'll never be the same" Wonderful poem; I espcially love the part above. It brings together the poem's message so well. Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, it sounds like we can "all" relate to the message of this lovely poem you've once again gifted us with. "Just hold me like you'll never let me go..." (as John Denver wrote...) ...... sigh........ yes, I can relate.... wonderful poem, Marge...thank you! ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Christie~ You are such a devoted reader and I want you to know it is appreciated. Claire~ Oh ... to even think this poem would bring thoughts of John Denver and his wonderful music to your mind ... is one MEGA-compliment to this lady. Thank you. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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