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nightloy
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-03-22 11:29 PM


Do you know my biggest fear,
What I'm scared I will one day hear.
I fear that you will tell me that we're through,
Your feelings have changed and you want someone new.
Am I right to feel this way,
Will I feel like this every day.
It is in me running through every bone,
Will I survive if I'm left alone.
Is what I'm saying just foolish cries,
Because hurt is what I really despise.

                      ~nightloy


 

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Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-03-23 09:26 AM


Hi Nightloy,

I have to say I live with this question in my heart every day and have spent many a tear on this thought. I do have good reasons to have these thoughts and all I can say is from what I have come up with is that if something happens some how I will survive, I do my best and thats all any one can do. You write from the heart this is a great poem thank you for sharing.

Welcome to passions,

Cerenity

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-23 10:47 AM


hi and welcome...well written expression of your fears and need, we all feel this way sometime...very nice to have you here with us...take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-03-23 10:59 PM


We can't live our lives being afraid to fall...sometimes we just have to jump and hope we find someplace soft to land  
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