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My Silent Longing
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My Silent Longing |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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My Silent Longing Alone at night my mind wanders free Wishing you here, here next to me Alone I lye with darkness my "friend" Engulfing my soul-- never my heart to mend. My mind drifts away to that beautiful scene Alone just us two on that shore so serene Swinging with the breeze in the warm summer rays Toes skimming grass till slumber drift us away. In my silent longing your heart speaks my name Yearning for "us" I call out just the same Torture me not with silence once more Speak to me my love, there remains an open door. "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ This is just lovely. Longing for that 'open door' to be entered. This one came from your heart and it shows.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'd never disagree with Marge...this is purely heart m'dear...lovely!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A very wanting poem Marie. Well done Marina |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks Marge, Devina and Marina~ Maybe one day soon "he" will enter that door~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
such soulful longing expressed......sad and yet hopeful at the same time and l love the toes skimming...so playful and lighthearted Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I have a longing myself. Know the feelings you express. Well done. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Tess, Thank you for your kind remarks... our toes did skim... it was so relaxing~ Danny, Someitmes I think I wrote the book on longing~ Thanks much~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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