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My Beginning, My End
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My Beginning, My End |
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NewbiePoetGuy Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 13Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA |
We met on a cold January day But your love made it feel like it was May We lived and loved each other for a few weeks Then you said "I need some time to think" Three years was the date we set I said I'd wait if it was your love I'd get We grew colser and closer over the next few weeks But then you disappeared like fog around the mountain peeks. My life continued on, though I paid no attention to it For without you the world is nothing more than a bottomless pit I never realized how empty my life was until God brought us together Now I know I'll love you forever I pray every night that we are meant to be That you'll come back and just love me. People say love is the greatest gift of all But then why does it feel like my heart has been mauled? I cry every night that we are apart This crying is due to my broken heart This pain made me say and feel things I now regret For you said you forgive me but I know you will never forget From the very beginning my only intention was to love you, and strive to let you know how lucky I am. To hear your beautiful, melodic voice again would bring tears of joy to my eyes For it has brought me such joy that I can never, and will never tell you a single lie All that is mine I would gladly give up To touch my lips to yours just once. You are my alpha and my omega My beginning and my end You to me are forever Not some passing trend I would sacrafice everything I hold dear Just to forever have you near For you I'd wait forever and a day Because it might take that long to bring your love my way From your path I will never stray Because, my dear AuraLee, for me to live you are the only way. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Newbie~ This is soooooo sweet. I hope she comes back into your life. And if that doesn't happen ... look at the beautiful memories she has given you to write about. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Even the painful experiences in life can be put into beautiful poetry. Good job!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wow this is beautiful writing and I am very sincere and understanding about this...in your heart you found love but in her heart she said its time to move on. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I do hope you shared this one with her  |
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NewbiePoetGuy Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 13Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA |
Hey People, thanks for all the good replies. And Hoot_n_owl, ah i hope i spelled it right, but anyways i cant share it with her because she likes someone else now so if i did she would just say i dont feel the same way, get over it, so i have to keep it to myself, anywayz thanks again all see ya later |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I liked your style of writing - I hope love comes your way soon  Roniece Wishing you sunshine and smiles for your day |
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