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**Under The Waterfall**
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**Under The Waterfall** |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Deep into the forest, Dark secluded place, You and I share a secret, A warm passionate embrace, Tropical smells all around, gently we lay upon the ground, You kiss my cheek and pull back my hair, I am lost inside your lovers stare, You take my hand and lead underneath this waterfall, Drops of warm soothing water,big and small, Falling all over my body like rain in the summertime, As I am falling into your poetry and rhyme, You whisper I love you, I want you, You are my one desire, I need this cool water to help control this fire, Fire of love burning hot inside, My love for you I cannot hide, I dream of this fantasy, A place I often recall, Where your with me, underneath the waterfall. "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Romantic and passionate! Beautiful!  Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Denise!!!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sigh very nice...its still warm in here...spring fever going strong... beautiful sweet poem lovely imagery RM jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Such a beautiful portrait has thy hand created young maid It truly touches ones heart and from one so young Surely all the young Knights shall be at thy castle door with this one Heart Ah the spirit of youth I do miss it so. Loneheart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love the part..."tropical smells all around..gently we lay upon the ground." Lovely romantic thoughts beyond compare. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How romantic |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you miss Marie...yeah its spring still hot in here! hehe...turn on the air condition!lol! Lone thank you for your replies, if I can be half as good a poet as you I will be blessed! James your a sweetheart!!!glad you enjoyed the journey!  Hoot: I am very honered that you like it and thought it to be romantic! < !signature-->"Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH....do you have it bad or what?? Loved each word of this. You express your feelings so well. He is lucky indeed!! Romance, passion, mystery...wow!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lone...I am hopeing and wishing for this kind of love...writing poems such as these are my dreams...my hopes of having this kind of love....! I would have it bad if only someone would have it this bad for me...by the way...I like Michael w. Smith!!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Romantic Heart, I pray there is someone close to you that benefits from your obvious passions, these works of yours are beautiful. I dream of this fantasy, A place I often recall, Where your with me, underneath the waterfall. These lines are particularly moving. David2 |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Romantic Heart...you certainly lived up to your pen name with this one. Truly beautiful! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
David...due to circumstances at the moment...well, I guess my passion will just have to be displayed here for all of you standing by to receive it! as long as your enjoying it ?Beautiful...I am blushing! Yours is beautiful as well! Wild child:Thanks for saying I am who I am...this is me!What you see is what you get.. "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This makes me want to run out and find a waterfall and take a sweetheart along. So romantic this is, "falling all over my body like rain in the summertime". sensual for sure, Well done. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Nativetexan2 Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 13 |
Heart, Such moving words. You certainly have a way with them. I could actually feel the spray of the waterfall. Keep up the good work for all of us hopeless romantics(or should I say hopeful. Rich |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Can't get more romantic than that. One of my fovorite places in the world to be is underneath a waterfall. Beautiful poem. Michael |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Danny,Native, and Michael, thats for your replies! under the waterfall is one of my favorite places to be its one of my daydreams....being sensual is part of being a poetess! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds like a beautiful place to be! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I certainly think your name fits your poetry. Each one seems more romantic than the last. Very tender and wonderful,dear poet Liz |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sweet, lovely, and so romantic. I enjoyed this very much. *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Elizabeth: thanks for reading! Elizabeth santos: Thanks for the compliment! Krista: Thank you, glad you enjoyed! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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AndreaA02 New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 8Corpus Christi, TX |
Perfect poem for the new season! Loved it! |
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