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Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

0 posted 2000-03-22 08:11 PM

Dream With Me

A soft cloud of feathers cushions my weary head,
Troublesome thoughts melt quickly into nothingness,
A smile dances on my lips,
Eyes happily close as you come to me in my dreams.

So real I can touch you, hold you close,
In my mind I have memorized you,
An imprint of you captured on my heart,
To look upon while you are gone,
As I wait and wonder,
How long will it be?
Until you are again with me.

Out the window I see the dark sky,
Laden heavy with her precious sparkling lights,
I smile again, as I picture you,
Are you looking at the stars in their beauty too.

With your name on my lips,
The window is open,
A kiss blows on the night breeze,
When you catch it will you smile,
As I do when l dream of you?

Deep sadness wraps its arms around me,
Longing to be with you,
Together in flesh,
As we are forever in heart and soul.

Your love wraps around me,
Although you're not with me,
And I dream of our love,
Together for eternity.

Tess

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-03-22 08:36 PM

This poem has wonderful images and expressed your love beautifully. I enjoyed this much, thanks for sharing it here with us, and welcome to Passions.

[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-22-2000).]

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

2 posted 2000-03-22 09:17 PM

Thanks for the welcome

I'm glad to be here

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-03-22 10:54 PM

Yes, I must agree. . . the images in this poem, along with the ones at your website, have left my mind filled with visions of Atlantis. . .

Welcome to Passions, my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

4 posted 2000-03-22 11:22 PM

You're going to get an Ohhh... Ahhh... Ohhh... from me~
Such beautiful words and beautiful emotions~
Lovely poem~
Marie~

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

5 posted 2000-03-23 08:14 AM

Sven - Thank you

and I enjoy the images and the feelings that you
create in your poems too!

Mariee66 It's a lovely feeling when people enjoy my poems
Thanks for taking the time to post a comment

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-03-23 08:34 AM

Tess~
Lovely .. absolutely lovely.
Replete with image and softness.
Can you tell that I like it?
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

7 posted 2000-03-23 09:10 AM

Thnaks Marge

I really appreciate your encouraging responses
First posts in a new group are always a bit nerve wracking!

Tess

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2000-03-23 09:27 AM

A wonderful dreamy vision of love in this poem. I feel like I want to go back to bed and just think. Oh no, I've got to get to work! Shucks.
Liz

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

9 posted 2000-03-23 09:27 AM

Hi, welcome to Passions. I am very new myself and your poem was quite moving. I felt the loss you were trying to convey. Thanks for a fine piece of work!

David2

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

10 posted 2000-03-23 09:29 AM

THanks Elizabeth and David

I've enjoyed reading your work too

Tess

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

11 posted 2000-03-23 09:36 AM

Tess, let me echo the nice comments already expressed. I enjoyed this poem. I liked
"a kiss blows on the night breeze".
"Longing to be with you"
Wonderful expression.
Also, thanks for responding to my poem.
Danny

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

12 posted 2000-03-23 10:23 AM

And Thank YOU Danny for taking time to leave a comment

Tess

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

13 posted 2000-03-23 10:50 AM

Tess..what a lovely expression of love

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

14 posted 2000-03-23 11:21 AM

Thanks

Tess

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

15 posted 2000-03-23 03:53 PM

This is very beautiful, Tess! Very well written!

Denise

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

16 posted 2000-03-24 02:50 AM

Thanks Denise

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

17 posted 2000-03-24 02:54 AM

Beautiful beautiful poem, Tess. Conveys emotion well and lovely imagery as well.

Michael

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

18 posted 2000-03-24 03:23 AM

Gave me a smile and a touch of bittersweet longing. Beautiful imagery, wonderful emotional flow. Welcome to Passions...hope to see more.

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

19 posted 2000-03-24 08:09 AM

Yes...WELCOME Tess.... and a wonderful poem!!!

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

20 posted 2000-03-24 11:40 AM

Thanks for the welcome Michael, Wild Child and Robert, and I've enjoyed reading your poems too

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

21 posted 2000-03-24 11:57 AM

Tess,
I truly enjoyed this poem. The imagery is so vivid and the mood is so soft, I can only read it in wonderment. I really enjoyed your work!

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