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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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If you could see deep inside of me I wonder if we would see the same would you feel my heart quicken to see me smile at nature so untame The beauty of a butterfly in flight the way night is lit by the moon or day is brightened by the sun how I tap to a Mantovani tune Or the concern when I see a child sad or looking lost and all alone the lady as she looks through trash so thankful for the little that I own Or of the many smiles that reach my face reading of all your lives each and every day that salty taste as I cry with those that hurt looking for something cheery that I can say Or hope we each will find and give away a smile to those that hurt and keep it from us remembering that we're the lucky ones if our days consist of a minus and a plus.. HUGS |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When I saw the title, I was afraid this was gonna be a math test... and my brain is already fried. LOL. But instead, I found a beautiful poem... from a lovely lady who is such a plus in my life!!! |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
from this i see...a WONDERFUL person you must be!  take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a poem full of beauty and truth! Very lovely, Cindy! Denise |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The lady has a huge heart.... how did it fit in such a tiny body??? LOL... HuggsZzzz |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
We're the lucky ones for sure. Wonderfully written! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: Well, I know you're good at maths, so I set you a test.. HUSG Broken Wings: I can think of two responses, one is, how can I heal your broken wing and the other is, no.. HUGS Denise: I just answered your other post, not tongue in cheek although it may sound that way...but sometimes I'm afraid to type words, it's much like having a tape recorder on, you hate the sound of hearing your own voice.. HUSG LR: Be quiet, you!!!...It's not my fault, I need more red wine to build me up...*g* HUSG Danny: you sneaked in there, yes, sweetheart, if you have food in the kitchen, a pound or a dollar in your pocket, a roof over your head, all you lack is arms to hold you, unless of course you're lucky enough to have two of them as well.. HUGS [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You are a rainbow for sure Cindy...lovely poem. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I would and do see exactly that Rainbow.... Beautiful poem ...... HUSG |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
A very thoughtful poem, one we all need to keep in mind as we rush through hectic days and sleepless nights. You made my day just a bit brighter. Thanks, David2 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Reflection of your heart...Beautiful! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Martie: Bless you.. HUSGPepper: Thanks sweetheart.. HUSGDavid2: Well, Rainbows like to brighten things up.. HUGSWhydove: Something like that.. HUSG |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
What a beautiful poem.I see a lady that brings much joy to people.We are all so very lucky to have you in our hearts.Now that is what i call a big plus Take care, love ya!!carol |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Cindy...I know the past couple of days had to have been terrible for you, know you are in my thoughts hon. You are a wonderful person and your writing moves many. E-mail me if you want to talk. Love Ya girl ((((HUGS)))) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ How appropriate that we take time to count the little blessings in life. Today is a PLUS ... you are here in my heart and my thoughts and prayers. GREAT BIG HUGS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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