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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Is the best Well come as I was in courage by a fiend to be gone this journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you into a piece full come for table ground but if you no thing like me you be tried of the same mold contempt or airy voids that sneaks to glory fly woke gather then tall ants which draft tick ally skewers art and graces such in dived level souls with the drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart con trash to ease kind of odor ease very same will not rest pond to a poets rule of dumb which pears to be just act ally what they lethal ridge ally cordon wit newt protest or sin sure as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough will fat make it add mire able odor I weight for the voids to rule ball looming nocturne ally true in neat..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
While I am not certain that the form is considered poetry, I very much like the insight and the content. Welcome aboard. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thanks Gun, It took me a long time to see poetray in the beginning but I'm sure you'll get there. Thanks just the same. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I don't think that Gunslinger is being very fair, I think that poetry is defined as just the expression of a feeling to make it's beauty clear, there for this must be some form of poetry or anougher, any way it's a nice thought, keep them coming . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky ... and man oh man are you just exactly that ... L U C K Y ! What a BEAUTIFUL POEM and the format is as esthetically pleasing as the thoughts you've penned. Such talent ! I admire greatly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
These words spoken from the heart are beautiful poetry! |
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