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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Laden with emotions that pull them down Raindrops fall as the world moves below Forming puddles of sadness Iced winds cut through seemingly still air Ripping and weaving all around Chilling everything that stands in its path To the very core And there I stand Alone in the storm of nothingness I long for the sun to come and warm me So that my frozen soul may finally melt [This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"alone in the storm of nothingness..." I LOVED this line...nice work. Thank you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, wow this is great!! And there I stand Alone in the storm of nothingness.....WOW.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece Serenity, thanx for your lovely reply. Moonshine. *-*-*-*-*-*-*- Thanx for your lovely reply and comment DA. Moonshine *-*-*-*-*-*-*- |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece Serenity, thanx for your lovely reply. Moonshine. *-*-*-*-*-*-*- Thanx for your lovely reply and comment DA. Moonshine *-*-*-*-*-*-*- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"And there I stand Alone in the storm of nothingness I long for the sun to come and warm me So that my frozen soul may finally melt" Moonshine, this is a wonderful poem. The last stanza floored me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well written poem. Very sad.  Denise |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
*picking Hoot up off the floor* lol Thanx Hoot for your lovely reply and compliment. Moonshine. *-*-*-*-*-*-*- Thanx for your lovely reply and compliment Denise. Moonshine. *-*-*-*-*-*-*- |
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