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Jazzgal's Song--Challenge #7
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Jazzgal's Song--Challenge #7 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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On the island of Fiji in the month of May You can hear her voice dripping in the chocolate moonlight "Jazzgal speaks!" I've heard the natives say I've searched for her every day, but I'm going to find her tonight I've heard her song on those sultry nights coming in from the east It would start at sunset, play through the night and never cease I would stay awake at night hearing that music soft and clear Every night I would search for it, to bring that song near. Again tonight, I hear her siren's song And tonight, I'll find the music I've sought for so long When I find her on that hidden shore My search will be ended, and she'll weep no more. ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
how mysterious and magical, Sven! Corinne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....you seem to be up to the challenges. Great job!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
love the thought of chocolate moonlight--very magical indeed... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Was it just me or did anyone else feel like jumping up yelling "Here I AM!!!" I thought it was a beautiful poem. Marina |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the title to this poem, and as for the verse, a different subject, quite refreshing and very well written Liz |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another masterpiece, Sven!  Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Corinne. . . thank you LW. . . I love a challenge!! Why not take a trip to Poetry Challenge! and see if you can come up with one? Martie, I wonder if we could get Chocolate Moonlight in cans? Marina, I think that it was just you. . . but I do see your. . . hand in the back Elizabeth #1, thank you my friend. . . your words mean a lot. . . Elizabeth #2, I don't know about a masterpiece. . .how about a treasure? LOL --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Hey! what do you mean...I didn't have my hand up the backside of anyone!!...Oh...you mean..Ehm..the back of the room. I know that! Marina |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
HEY! I am the first Elizabeth! Even though Elizabeth S. posted before me I was registered before she was! Hehe--just joking around here... Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL Marina. . . I think you've always had your hand in those places!! Elizabeth. . . if you want to be the first one, you can be the first one. . . -----------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-23-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, challenge well met |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I'm sure I don't know what you mean! Marina |
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