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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-21 11:31 PM


I got a craving
that wont go away
i ate all day
but the craving stays
what could it be
that i want to eat
pickles n' cheese
or a nice peice of meat
mint chocolate chip
cookies galore
my stomach is full
do i dare eat more
my stomach still wants
something from me
so i sit and ask myself
what could this craving i have tonight be??

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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-22 06:30 PM


Maybe its your heart that craves and not your stomach.
Interesting piece.....what did you eat to satisfy that craving???????

David2
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 407

2 posted 2000-03-22 08:37 PM


What a cute poem! I agree with Danny though, it sure sounds as though it is your heart that is craving.
     David2

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