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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-21 11:22 PM


I told you everything
about me and him
I told you things
from deep within
Things with you
i only shared
and stupid me
i thought u cared
I told you things
he said when we talked
I cried to you
when we fought
i told you
how i felt inside
i told you
all the reasons i cried
you said you didnt want to hurt me
so you lied
if your only friends
tell me.......whats there to hide?
"is there really a you and him"
thats what you said
"or is it your imagination Ang"
is what i read
how could you not believe
all that i have said
do you really think
this is all in my head?
that one sentence
is all you needed to say
now i see you
the real way
Another "friend"
i thought i had
Another "friendship"
gone bad.....how sad


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-21-2000).]

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Rosalind Palafox
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Posts 88

1 posted 2000-03-22 07:36 PM


yeah it hurts when htings go wrong. but one must keep looking...  

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

mete out
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
2 posted 2000-03-23 05:35 AM


***just_another_fe,
I can totally empathise with you in this poem.
I too have been completely f***ed over by so-called friends and I still am.
It hurts so much, but you must know that you are the better person and that you are strong-willed enough to carry on with out their lies and platitudes.

Keep writing,
Keep fighting.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


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