Open Poetry #6 |
My God is a Loving God |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
My God is a loving God Not one of vengeance or wrath But one who comes with arms open And warms the heart with a loving laugh My God helps me in so many ways When things go wrong, I don’t question why I just give in to faith ever renewing And hold my hands up to the blessed sky It may be blasphemy today It may be wrong to say It may be why I feel this way My God is a loving God Not one to cruelly destroy But breathes life into me When life is fully enjoyed My God is the creator of me And all that I am A never ending story To be read over and over again It may be blasphemy today My body offered up this way Before my God I pray |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
wonderful work JML...an enjoyable read. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JML, The grace of God shows through loud and clear. Wonderful poem!!!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
AMEN! What a beautiful heartfelt portrayal of God. I think that is the message the world in general needs to hear.....that God is a loving God! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My God is the creator of me And all that I am A never ending story To be read over and over again It may be blasphemy today My body offered up this way Before my God I pray ------------------- I'm reading between the lines in this one...for some reason i think you have a hidden meaning...entwine our minds and enlighten me...HMMM...that sounds like the begining of a poem stalking you always, your jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks, and yes, it could be taken in a different way. I hope i wrote it in such a way. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I can't help but sing the song when I see this title "My God Is A Loving God" |
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