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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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On my window gently tapping Is the sound of rain left rapping To the beat of sorrows song Through the day and all night long. To the window I venture forth Looking for a ray of warmth For days on end we see this pour Only rain and nothing more. (Can anyone tell I'm homebound and sick of the rain?? ARRGGHH!) "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Excellent, lovely rhythm. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I know that feeling! This is a great poem, Marie! It sings like a song! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Marie but on the bright side, the rain brings the spring flowers! Lovely poem. Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marie, Short and sweet. I love it!!! Hang in there, it has to end sometime!!!!!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ This is just oozing with the images of your rainfall. What I would give for some of your rain here in Florida right now. I'm ready for some puddle-jumping ! Enjoyed this so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
 According to the forecast, I'll need those shades tomorrow... finally! U K Hreo, Denise, Marina, Lone Wolf and Marge: Thanks for your replies Glad you liked my little ditty~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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