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I Fold You Tightly
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I Fold You Tightly |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I Fold You Tightly I fold you tightly into blankets creases snuggle closely in to feel your warmth absence of your virtual body ceases my illusional imagination takes a hold Snuggle closely in to feel your warmth entangled angrily in the blankets war silence of invisible breath raging forth clenched fists grasping to win struggle Absence of your virtual body ceases memories candlelight slowly flickers sleepy mind's mere identity releases soothing silence meditative presence My illusional imagination takes a hold solemnly granting me peaceful sleep dreaming cultivated meadows of gold I fold you tightly into blankets creases |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This gave me a warm and cozy feeling! This gray cold rainy day would be just perfect to snuggle up with some of those meadows of gold! This is beautiful, Gloria! Denise |
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AndreaA02 New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 8Corpus Christi, TX |
Your detail is amazing. Your words put me to ease. I loved it! ~Andrea |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank You so much, glad you enjoyed. AndreaA02: I thank you very much, glad you loved it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gloria, just this title brought a smile to my face and the poem even more so. Wonderful work my friend  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gloria I love how you did this! How you started so sweetly, then into a struggle and to end just as sweetly as you started! Wonderful A+ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth: I Thank You very much Rebecca: A warm Thank you to you also |
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