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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2000-03-21 02:22 PM



    Days of blooming spring
           Boughs of weeping willow wave
Dancing with delight

~*Marge Tindal*~ 2000





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MyPenNameIsSam
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1 posted 2000-03-21 02:23 PM


aw     .... a perfect image of spring!    
-molly aka sam< !signature-->

 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield




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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-03-21 02:30 PM


Giant smile
you plastered
on my face
with this one.

mariee66
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3 posted 2000-03-21 02:40 PM


Ahhh... Ohhh... Ahhh...
So beautiful the picture you create~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


Denise
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4 posted 2000-03-21 03:01 PM


I love weeping willows! Very beautiful, Marge! I have a poem by the same title but it is about an afternoon with my granddaughter. Delights come in all packages, don't they?!!  

Denise

Lorelei54
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5 posted 2000-03-21 03:52 PM


and I was thinking about another kind of "afternoon delight"...anyone else?

nice Marge..I always love what you write

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6 posted 2000-03-21 04:39 PM


Sam~

Always spring in bloom
Lover's hearts are opening
Love blooms everywhere
~*Marge*~

Lost Dreamer~

Softly sing of spring
Let joyous lovers be heard
Harmonies take flight
~*Marge*~


Marie~

Look ! Edge of forest
Bunnies hop in grasses green
Cotton tail delight
~*Marge*~


Denise~

Sweet willows of weep
Tears leave on soft breeze blowing
Float sorrow away
~*Marge*~


Lorelei~

You blow me away
Wanton spirit of delight
Creature of habit
~*Marge*~




Martie
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7 posted 2000-03-21 04:47 PM


My mind was right there with Lorelei...

Day of wind in motion
leaves are dancing
sky of reverent blue

Marina
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8 posted 2000-03-21 06:52 PM


Marge I think this is the shortiest poem I've seen you write. Long or short It is a delight as always.

Marina

devina
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9 posted 2000-03-21 07:03 PM


This is light and feathery Marge...beautiful poem for such beautiful weather.

Enjoy the sun on your face hun...I know I am!!!

Love you,
~devina

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Corinne
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10 posted 2000-03-21 07:06 PM


Aye, surely she's the queen of Haiku!!!

Loverly, Marge!

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11 posted 2000-03-21 07:26 PM


Marge,

Pretty words, pretty visions...

~ Claire

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-03-21 07:32 PM


Martie~
Lovely reply, my friend.

Reverent blue sky
At peace with rains of summer
Clouds go drifting by
~*Marge*~

Marina~
Shorty Haiku's that I love doing.

Image appears soft
Your smile reflects happiness
Leaps to face of me

~*Marge*~

Devina~

Feathered light wing brings
Touch of smile from one in love
Thoughts of one afar

~*Marge*~

Corinne~

Barefoot nymph dances
In rain on Florida shore
Lithe, light and lovely

~*Marge*~

Claire~

Visions come to mind
Flashing lights of brilliance
Beauty soon follows
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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INclan
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13 posted 2000-03-21 07:45 PM


Nice Haiku Marge...but then you know I like the style.

Yes, my mind first went somewhere else....

hehehe

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14 posted 2000-03-21 07:54 PM


INclan~
Thanks.  It's a joy we share.

Red-breasted Robin
Hops about upon the lawn
Earthworm burrows deep
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2000-03-21 08:29 PM


Nice Haiku, Marge.  Can't wait for spring!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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16 posted 2000-03-21 08:43 PM


Lone Wolf~
Thank you.  Me too !

Lone wolf howls at moon
Somewhere across the meadow
Answering echo
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2000-03-21 09:33 PM


Smiling here  
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2000-03-21 09:51 PM


Hoot~
Thanks for the smile.

Bough of pine in night
Echoes sound of hooting owl
What a wise old pine
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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