»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #6
»
Afternoon Delight
| Open Poetry #6 |
|
Afternoon Delight |
|
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
|
Days of blooming spring Boughs of weeping willow wave Dancing with delight ~*Marge Tindal*~ 2000 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
aw  .... a perfect image of spring! -molly aka sam< !signature--> Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield [This message has been edited by MyPenNameIsSam (edited 03-21-2000).] |
||
|
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Giant smile you plastered on my face with this one. |
||
|
mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ahhh... Ohhh... Ahhh... So beautiful the picture you create~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love weeping willows! Very beautiful, Marge! I have a poem by the same title but it is about an afternoon with my granddaughter. Delights come in all packages, don't they?!!  Denise |
||
|
Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
and I was thinking about another kind of "afternoon delight"...anyone else? nice Marge..I always love what you write |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sam~ Always spring in bloom Lover's hearts are opening Love blooms everywhere ~*Marge*~ Lost Dreamer~ Softly sing of spring Let joyous lovers be heard Harmonies take flight ~*Marge*~ Marie~ Look ! Edge of forest Bunnies hop in grasses green Cotton tail delight ~*Marge*~ Denise~ Sweet willows of weep Tears leave on soft breeze blowing Float sorrow away ~*Marge*~ Lorelei~ You blow me away Wanton spirit of delight Creature of habit ~*Marge*~ |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
My mind was right there with Lorelei... Day of wind in motion leaves are dancing sky of reverent blue |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Marge I think this is the shortiest poem I've seen you write. Long or short It is a delight as always. Marina |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is light and feathery Marge...beautiful poem for such beautiful weather. Enjoy the sun on your face hun...I know I am!!! Love you, ~devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Aye, surely she's the queen of Haiku!!! Loverly, Marge! |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, Pretty words, pretty visions... ~ Claire |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Lovely reply, my friend. Reverent blue sky At peace with rains of summer Clouds go drifting by ~*Marge*~ Marina~ Shorty Haiku's that I love doing. Image appears soft Your smile reflects happiness Leaps to face of me ~*Marge*~ Devina~ Feathered light wing brings Touch of smile from one in love Thoughts of one afar ~*Marge*~ Corinne~ Barefoot nymph dances In rain on Florida shore Lithe, light and lovely ~*Marge*~ Claire~ Visions come to mind Flashing lights of brilliance Beauty soon follows ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Nice Haiku Marge...but then you know I like the style. Yes, my mind first went somewhere else.... hehehe |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INclan~ Thanks. It's a joy we share. Red-breasted Robin Hops about upon the lawn Earthworm burrows deep ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice Haiku, Marge. Can't wait for spring!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lone Wolf~ Thank you. Me too ! Lone wolf howls at moon Somewhere across the meadow Answering echo ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling here |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thanks for the smile. Bough of pine in night Echoes sound of hooting owl What a wise old pine ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
