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First__Knight
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0 posted 2000-03-21 06:38 AM


No More Plans
~First  Knight~

Darkness calls so…..
Where does it end when the road travels on?
Resources found low while left with despair.
Needless time spent wishing.

Alone, worthless, abandon,
Empty of self and yet full of pain.
Events unfold without control,
Hidden feelings, untouched.

Self reliant, unjust demands
I’ve been here before
And I’ll be here again.
Telling one self  “I will be alright”,
I have to , because I am all there is.

I know I am alive because I feel the pain but,
If life is found to be that which happens while you make plans of the future……
What do you do when there are no more plans to make?




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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-21 07:32 AM


David~, my friend~

Life throws us all a curve every now and again.  
It's how we travel the curves that
leads us to brighter plans waiting to be made.
There are ALWAYS plans to be made,
my friend ... ALWAYS !

Life deems it necessary to test our worth
by measuring who we are ... by what we do
for another.  If at the end of day ...
I have more left over than what I have
given away ... I have not given my most
to others.  I must plan on giving more tomorrow.  
To someone, somewhere whose need is greater than my own.

Sweetheart, use that 'self-reliancy' to be just that.  
Give of yourself to others.
Now .. how's that for a 'plan' of action ?  

Great big *HUGS* to you.
Find a plan that works for you and gives joy to someone else !
Love you ~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
2 posted 2000-03-21 07:40 AM


Sweetheart, you make plans to breath, and then when you can manage that one, you make plans to open your eyes and feelt he warmth of the sunshine (if you have any) then watch nature...works for me..

HUGS

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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3 posted 2000-03-21 07:44 AM


Yep - what Marge and RG said...

Wise wise words from both.



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-03-21 11:01 AM


David,
    This poem makes me quite sad. Our lives are what we make of them and we have two choices, either to make the best of what we have or to be miserable...I think I know you well enough to know you want the best. You have people that care a great deal about you, you only need to open your eyes and see that.
Hugs  
Ruth

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