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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-03-21 05:35 AM



            My Heart said come follow me

               My Head said I cant

                 My Heart said take my Hand

              My Head said I'm afraid

                 My Heart said Im Wishes
           and Fairydust

                My Head said Wishes never come
            true and Fairydust washes off

                   My Heart Broke in two

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-21 11:20 AM


This is very sad  

Denise

Ravenlearns2fly
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2 posted 2000-03-21 12:05 PM


Remember sometimes the heart and head know not what the other is doing.
sad but I loked it!
Raven

 

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2000-03-21 12:16 PM


Eyes,
Succint and interesting, enjoyed the read

MyPenNameIsSam
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4 posted 2000-03-21 12:49 PM


Wonderful poem... simple yet perfect  
-molly aka sam

 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield



christies heart
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5 posted 2000-03-21 04:19 PM


So true! I can relate to this one.  
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-03-21 04:27 PM


there is always a battle between our hearts and our minds! you described it well, !!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-03-21 08:35 PM


Oh, I like this despite how sad it is  
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