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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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SWEPT AWAY I see your eyes and realize There's nothing left to say. The chemistry overcomes me Yeah, I've been swept away. Emerald shine of love all mine, I fall into the gleam. Holding you near, feeling no fear, I know ‘tis but a dream. The picture pulls, a soft voice lulls, Sweet magic fills the air. A tingly dance of sweet romance Taken me unaware. By passions born I dare adorn To offer you my hand. To share by song this need I long For you to understand. To feel the burn, to taste in turn The passion from your lips. To feel your skin melting within These searing fingertips. A pulsating flame abating All conscience control. With eyes of dare meeting my stare, As two become one soul. So soft you call, there offer all Of yourself unto me. Allure of voice leaving no choice, I answer destiny. So crystal clear, so far yet near, Lies our love intertwined. I hold you tight all through the night, If only in my mind. Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Michael: this is so beautiful, I'm sure it makes every woman who reads it think it belongs to her...very emotional. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've touched me deeply with this Michael... patience is no friend of mine right now...this was beautiful... Remember I won't be just in your mind, soon I will be right there... Until then...I'm keeping you close at heart... All my love ~D< !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
passing shadows, Thank you... I'm glad you enjoyed. Devina, you read me like a book, sweetheart. Know that I'm holding you close in heart also. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow...I really don't know what to say, this is so beautifully written Michael! I'm glad to see you using your talent in a more positive way though!  Good luck to you both! I love the title! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see your eyes and realize There's nothing left to say. The chemistry overcomes me Yeah, I've been swept away. --------------- By passions born I dare adorn To offer you my hand. To share by song this need I long For you to understand. ------------- *SIGH* this is SO emotionally beautiful M, truly, I know you are our king of darkness, but it is SO nice to see you writing such longing and lovefilled poems... seems spring fever is still in the air in here(smile) perfect poem M, LUCKY LUCKY GIRL take carem jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Michael! May all your dreams come true! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ That super title drew me in ... the positive thoughts held me. This is simply lovely. May you find that smile again. Remember, I've got a poem saved for you for when you do !  What a joy to see the enthusiasm on the faces of two friends. ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
You have said, so beautifully, the words I long to say to the girl I want. This is touching, Michael, and wonderfully written... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent, Great rhyming pattern throughout, well written, and a little twist at the end. Enjoyed much Liz |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'd really like to see this submitted to the main site and become a greeting card! It's so beautiful! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Michael, Glad to see the happiness returning ... Passionate and beautiful this poem ... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was so beautiful, it took my breath away, love it! I will try to sign your guest book again.!!!!"Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful poem Michael |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Swept away is exactly the effect this gave...in awe of your talents. Beautiful Michael. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sweeping everyone away with words like those Glad to see the cheerful side of ya again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Nothing left to say" ? Knowing you, not bloody likely! I am delighted for you! (I told you it would be incredible...) And..."your girl is lovely, Hubble..." serenity grins. Take good care of my sister, love... (Serenity exits, against the backdrop of a setting sun...) |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Sir Michael once again you have proven thy talent this was a superb piece of poetry truly beautiful Loneheart |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Gen, It feels good to have a positive outlet for me, too. Glad you liked the title, I was inspired there just a little bit, ya know! Marge, I remember, will be letting you know soon me thinks. PdV, thnx, may just do that. A Romantic Heart, glad to steal your breath with this one, I will look for your signing. serenity, Not likely at all me thinks...LOL I will take good care, promise. Now don't you go wandering off into oblivion now, ya hear me? Thank you all for the kind replies. Michael |
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