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Open Poetry #6

The God you give.....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-03-20 02:23 AM

where did you get those empty eyes
i have to know
so i can get a pair of my own
and what do you do with broken lies
im curious..curious to the bone
some say the god you own
is the god you give
show me the lesson here
there IS more to life than just fear.....
for me the need is always just to disappear...

Cypher
Junior Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 17

1 posted 2000-03-20 01:43 PM

Jackal
I'm surprised nobody's replied to this yet. Great job. There's a LOT more to life than fear. Would be scary if that wasn't true.

-Cypher

Ravenlearns2fly
Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 71

2 posted 2000-03-20 05:14 PM

Jackal
Fear is a teacher learn his teachings well.
Great poam!!!!
Raven

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-20 08:21 PM

i know I already replied to this in dp...but i wanted another read of this perfect poem

take care,jm

and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-20 09:26 PM

Very well written, Jackal, you have some good thoughts in here worth pondering.

Denise

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