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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Moonglow ~*Marge Tindal*~ Moonglow bathes the night with splendorous light glowing softly in her flight Amazing wonder doth behold look a piece of treasured gold when glancing up, you will see reflections of a lighted heart shining down brightly on thee Moonbeams shared in the night lasting 'til the morning light *A special moment shared with Helmut Becker 3/19/2000 |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marge, you have a gift for presentation as well as poetry. Nicely done. INclan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lovely poem, lovely moon, lovely spirit in you...Nice, Marge. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge, This was simply splendid! You write so amazingly well and convey a long range of emotions. The title is what initially drew me to this to begin with. Well, that and the fact that it was one of yours lol. But the poem itself lived up to the reputation of the poet! Nice job! AMY  < !signature-->~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 03-19-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INclan~ Thank you for that compliment. It is not taken lightly. I hope you can tell that I LOVE what I do. If it didn't please anyone else it would still please me ... the fact that it does is just a double-delight. Serenity~ For just 'a moment in time' the light is suspended for us to capture. The spirit of light shines tonight for sure. Thank you, little one. Amy~ A chance encounter through e-mail with a friend had me sending him to look at the moon that shines down on both of us ... it just rose in the sky and fell to the page. Thank you for enjoying it too. I hope I can always draw you in and not disappoint you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
As always very good my friend Loneheart |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
 Marge, You are just too cool for words... You amaze me~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, Marge...isn't the moon a magical muse? ~ Claire |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge this is beautiful, love the moon and you captured it beautifully. And the way you presented it, fantastic hon. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Loneheart~ Thank you, my friend. Mariee~ Gosh, thank you. Claire~ She is, indeed ! DarkAngel~ Thank you, hon. I hope everyone takes a moment to go out and look at her in all her evening finery. She's something to behold. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely beautiful Marge...I love moonlight. Exellent work, as always.  *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful expression. I find comfort in knowing that even though I can't see those that I love we share the same moon and stars. So close yet so far..... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Helmut Becker? You're sharing the moon with a Helmut Becker?? I'll murder da bum!! Marge, after I've given you the best odes of my life you share the moon with something football players wear on their heads? Is there no justice in this world????  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alwye~ Sharing that beautiful light with us all ... she is a wonder. So glad you enjoyed. ButterfliesDC~ She's something else, huh? And yes ... no matter how far away, she covers us all in her light. As if she isn't pretty enough alone, she goes and places stars in her hair. Awesome ! Balladeer~ LOL ! LOL !  You have given me beautiful odes ... so what's a little moonlight between friends? LOL ! Helmut will be pleased to see your ire ! Got me laughing my Balladeer. Love you just the same ... go look at the moon and I'll share with you too. You just look green with envy ! Oh, stop it ..... you've got my sides splitting with laughter. ~*Marge*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Got to please yourself...".. Somebody said that once, didn't they?.. Nice one, Marge... and Helmut is obviously good inspiration..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thanks, Nan. Between inspiration from Helmut and the glorious light of the moon ... it wrote itself. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I know I'm late and shame on me overlooking such good poetry Such lovely piece of moon we share And on the other sits Balladeer please be aware Meanwhile I thank thee for the dedication And here I stand sending ovation Thank you dear from within my heart For this poem in beauty and art Hugs and Love The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*Helmut*~ Never too late to share a smile though I haven't seen yours in a long while. Much love to you my dear friend. Moonglow I gladly shared. ~*Marge*~ |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
what a gorgeous poem and the presentation just increases the enjoyment I'm new to the poetry forum but look forward to reading more of your poems Tess |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I don't know how you do it Marge! Simply wonderful. Marina |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Marge, this is beautiful, the verse and the presentation! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How did I miss this beauty? and me all moony myself...so glad I can say, Yeah! this moon rocks!!!! |
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David B K New Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 1 |
Hi there... my first reply ever to a poem in Passionate Forums... been wandering around thinking about your poem for a bit, letting it remind me of my own nighttime frolics warmed by the friendly moonglow... thank you for bringing that through a well formatted poem... I enjoyed the personification of Moonglow as a benevolent lady of love with a golden heart... I'd love to see more images of how you picture her... Look forward to reading more of your work. David |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tess~ Well, goodness. I guess I have Helmut to thank again for bringing this one back so you all could enjoy it. Thank you for your reply. I told you that you are gonna like it here ! Marina~ It truly is just 'inspired' on the moment. Thank you so much for letting me know you like it. Denise~ Oh, thank you, hon. Martie~ LOL @ your 'moony self' ! I figured you must have fallen asleep watching the sunset ... and missed the glorious moon on the rise ! Thanks, friend. David BK~ My pleasure at being your first reply. I greatly appreciate your comments. Scattered through the pages of Open Forum #6, Open 5 and maybe even Open #4 you will find poetic references to the majestry of her mooness. Thank you so much. WELCOME TO PASSION'S ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Beautiful beautiful presentation Marge...reminds me of the full moon I've been seeing here lately...is very fullfilling!!! love ya, Devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Yep ... that's the one ! So inspiring ... and so lovely is she. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
I loved your imagry, Marge, thank you! David2 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
nicely written Marge ... how do you manage to keep quality so high with the obvious ease with which you write ... do you have an enchanted quill ? Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ You glow with your compliments. I thank you. Rex~ Gosh, what a wonderful thing to say! I guess I'd have to say that I feel the words I pen are just like talking to someone .. and I like to believe that I have a 'quality' that is sincere and would hope that's what you see. I'll take that 'enchanted quill' and put it to good use. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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