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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-19 08:24 PM


How do I tell her,
That I love her so?

A secret hidden in my heart,
Couldn’t stop myself from falling.

That one tyme we kissed,
Made all the difference.



 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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Indiana, USA
1 posted 2000-03-19 08:26 PM


Show her this and I think she will know.  Good Job.

INclan

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-03-19 09:11 PM


Tamma,

Ahhhh how a kiss can change so much. You should definitely tell this person how you feel, that's if you want to. Only you know whats best for you! Go with your heart. Either way, this was so heartfelt and beautiful!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-20 04:05 PM


If you have kissed, she obviously cares for you as well.  The eyes will say more than words.  

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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4 posted 2000-03-20 04:13 PM


I echo INclan, show her this beautiful poem. Well Done.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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