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Passing Shadows Of Dreams
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Passing Shadows Of Dreams ~*Marge Tindal*~ Of dreamless sleep I do not know the closing lids of evening stow a myriad of images displayed with glee within the very dreams of me On flights of fancy with billowing sail I travel the sea of dreams avail For when I choose to dream no more I find myself moored upon the shore Ships on passing in dream of night remain adrift on morning light Come sail with me to distant shore of dream-filled nights forevermore ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done  I love the last stanza, what a way to finish an already great work |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, You are such a loving person any one who sails with you will be quiet content. Cerenity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I agree with both the above answers. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thank you, honey. Cerenity~ All who sail the dreams are welcome aboard my 'ship of dreams'. Seymour~ Thank you, sailor of dreams. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
 You've wowed me again, Marge~ You weave such majic with your words... you are amazing~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! Never stop dreaming! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your boat is a poem your sail is a bird your dreams like crystal sparkle with your words |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ To weave the night with magic - is to dream. Thank you. Denise~ To cease to dream ... would be to cease life. Thank you, my friend. Martie~ My boat is afloat with winged sail dreaming the crystalized words billowing my sails Thank you, my friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Don't you know this one caught my eye...and touched my heart. Fascinating. ~shadows dance by the light within~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
>Passing Shadows~ Inspiration in 'passing' ... so pleased that you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Put this one on my "Favorites from Marge" list...  |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Beauty!!2 sleep perchance 2 dream Raven |
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zgkluckman New Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 4 |
i really enjoyed this one.Loved the title. It resonates and captures the eye. Zach |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Very pleased. Raven~ Ah ..... and that is what I did ! Zachary~ Thank you for the compliment. Welcome to our Passion's family. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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