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Hope against Hope
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Hope against Hope |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Hope against Hope Your words swirl around within the cruel sea of my heart so cruel it is, only they will splash around and play with my emotions your words alone will remind me of roller coaster days, as they echo throughout my being but, you my dream all misty and unclear my hope against hope, will drown flushed down deep down the S bend of my life Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Sigh*. . . DA, this is just wonderful. . . I can feel the longing and the effect of those roller coster days. . . why do we have to have them? This is one of life's unanswered questions. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing, DA. I can feel the pain. It's hard when our dreams die. I wish you brighter happier days. Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Someday, soon, the roller coaster will slow down. You'll get off. Shake off the past and move on. I'm here for you my friend until you're on your feet and the world stops reeling. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, You have many friends, enjoyed the poem. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA, now don't get mad, but the last few lines there caught me and made me laugh. flushed down deep down the S bend of my life Those are great words my dear! Great poem!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gloria...you are on a roll dear  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven thanks so much hon, yes I ask the same question. ---------------- Thanks so much Denise for your best wishes and lovely reply. ---------------- Sharon thank you so much my friend, that means alot to me and yes I know you are here for me and remember I am here for you too. ---------------- Seymour, yes I know I have many friends and I am so lucky to have them, I cherish them. glad you enjoyed the poem. ----------------- Angel girl, I am not mad heheh you made me laugh girl, thanks so glad you enjoyed those words probably as much as I enjoyed putting them there. *hugs*----------------- Ruth, thanks honey for your lovely reply but who is Gloria? ;-) What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
DA this is such a beautiful piece of writing but I am so sorry that this poem is from your heart and not ficticious wizardry. I do know that in time it will hurt a little more, and the sun will shine again - in the meantime I am here for you whenever you need someone to shelter you from the storm - always....... (((((((Hugebigwarmhuggs))))))) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, thanks so much honey *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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