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Three Haiku--Challenge #3

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-03-18 09:03 PM

Most noble Kaile
Embraces the Eastern sun
Sees the Western moon

Stranger in strange land
Discovering its secrets
Understanding them

Warrior of light
Gifted poet of the east
Share with us your song

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-18 10:21 PM

These are beautiful, Sven!

Denise

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-03-18 10:33 PM

Well done Sven! A gifted poet of the south...at least south of me my friend!

Marina

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2000-03-18 11:19 PM

Nicely done. I think I like the first the best.

INclan

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-03-19 09:04 AM

Warming skies of spring
Pervade morning's obscure haze
Summer's acquiesce

Nice ones, Sven..

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-03-20 11:43 PM

Nice haiku Sven. I like them all.

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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