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Sunrise |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
A sudden shaft of light pierces the sky, rising to the heavens. Color of fire, heating the darkened morn. I wonder, what lies at the end? The crisp March air, clouds of blue-black floating on a desolate pond of sky. Now parted by the orange glow of the sun, slowly rising over the trees, sculpting the edges into soft cotton candy. My heart burns for you. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Geesh, after reading this, I feel like saying, "Hi, my name is smoldering ashes, nice to meet you." LOL This is beautiful, how you captured the fire of a new love...You're very lucky ! Welcome to Passions by the way!  Very nice poem! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Such Passion...Such Fire. I enjoy sunrises, in the sky and in the heart. Wonderful imagery. INclan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...very descriptive. James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is lovely, another portrait in words... Welcome to the forum, very glad you're here. |
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