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Girls Night Out (My attempt at humour)
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Girls Night Out (My attempt at humour) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Girls Night Out A drink a day is best they say To celebrate since he finally took the bait You stayed tuff and called his bluff First a few beers, now they’ll be tears With gin we’ll talk of his tempting skin But the rye will always make us cry We’ll sip rum only if we’re still glum Pass the wine and we’ll be fine A Singapore Sling is definitely our thing So take my advice and roll the dice Leave him a “Back soon” letter, the booze has never been better And take one last fling before you put on that ring! Marina Mar 8/2000 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marina~ LOVE IT!!-SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, Marina, Marina. . . I love this one! Your attempt at humour is quite good. . . nice to see that we're not the only ones who feel this way. . .  ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marina, This was great and sounds fun to. Cerenity |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
indeed... Just a few beers Tossed down the hatch Will stop our ears From hearing that Mournful cry of venue That starts with "honey, could you..." When in doubt We'll wash it out With bourbon Scotch or beer And when we're through Back home to you We'll stumble full of fear. sorry, stereotypes and all...your poem is quite good for an "attempt" at humor. I have a stitch. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Sounds like quite the night out. Sorry I missed it!..lol |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sea, thank you Sven, In which "Way" do we both think??? Cerenity,thank you RSEvans,great poem, I like your version. Thanks for the response. Marlyn, don't worry next time you can come too. |
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busylisa_ca Junior Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 39 |
excellent poem. Drinks, drinks and more drinks!!! busylisa |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, You have to ask? ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
busylisa, thanks Sven, do I have to ask....perhaps not..or..maybe I prefer to whip it out of you. Marina |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like one of those nights. Reminds me of many years ago when I first started drinking so I tried a little of this and a little of that..and I was in France drinking with my friend...and in no time at all I was totally drunk..so we called a cab...and it was a Citreon..or the equivalent of the American Cadilac..and my friend warned the driver to proceed slowly..he proceeded to pull away like an indy race car driver..I threw up in the back of his cab..he cursed me out in every French curse word available..and he also wanted to strangle me. It didn't take me very long to learn not to mix the drinks...pick one a night and stick with it..I rarely drink today unless I go to Karaoke bars to sing and socialize. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James if I could tell you how many mishaps I've had during a "good night"..welllet me tell ya! Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh, I missed this one, its a girls perspective though. I know equality right, Guys do it. Nice touch with the be back soon letter. Had a few of those. James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marina This was HILLARIOUS! I'm still laughing. You go girl! Okay in all seriousness excellent poem, and very funny. Thanks for the many laughs and a few memories! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, thank you for bringing this back up but there was no need to take the time from you sunny location. Thanks agian! Amy, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, Well, there's the whip that I left in Adult. . . will that do?? ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Honey, any whip will do! Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
As long as your not picky! Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
What, no vodka, what kind of party is this anyway???? A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I must have been in Florida, and missed the party. Can we have another one? This was good for a laugh, though. Thanks Liz |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny, if I knew you were coming I certainly would have had Vodka for. Only with all these women aren't you afraid of being taken advantage of??? Liz, of course we can have another one...anytime. Thanks for the response. Marina |
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