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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Fate Concurred |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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How do you say I love you? Could there ever be a word that would prove this passion to my love, that you have never heard? Could I ever say I love you? When I fear you wont accept Would it help some if you knew about, how over us I wept? Could you tell me that you loved me? Could I ever see it through? Will together ever be a name we have for me and you? How could I say I love you When we know you’ll break my heart? And there’s nothing I can do to stop it from its fall apart. Will there ever be a word upon your beauty I could grace? Or has my fate concurred with this ever lonely place… |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So much longing in this Kevin! Beautifully done! I hope your dreams come true! Denise |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thanks d, dont we all hope our dreams come true |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kevin this is wonderful!! I can really relate to this poem, as I'm sure so many people can. Nothing is more difficult then putting yourself out on a limb. Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kevin, I truly like reading your style. A great poem. Parker |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Beautifully written..haven't we all been here and felt this way at some point in are lives. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Kevin, this is fantastic! It really touched me. Keep up the good work!  Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How do you say I love you? Could there ever be a word that would prove this passion to my love, that you have never heard? Could I ever say I love you? When I fear you wont accept Would it help some if you knew about, how over us I wept? ----------------- this is a deeply emotional piece...very impressive Kevin... very well expressed and written... you have a great stlye and talent. very nice. Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin...nice to see you around  Nice poem |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Kevin, great poem, universally beautiful. Cor |
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