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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2000-03-17 05:56 PM

If only I could be with you now,
for this love, so clear, so strong,
I’d spend every passing moment,
in the place where I belong.

Within your arms of shelter,
just listening to your song,
the one that always calls to me
even when I feel so alone.

You never let me turn away,
as if I would ever want to,
in that quiet and gentle voice,
repeating the words “I love you.”

I love you, too.

Corinne

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2000-03-17 05:58 PM

This is beautiful!

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-03-17 06:18 PM

Your last few poems are beckoning to romance...so anything we should know about? Come on do tell....

Marina

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-17 08:45 PM

Very lovely, Corinne!

Denise

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-03-18 09:18 AM

I like it..... Let's go another round..

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2000-03-18 06:31 PM

Thank you, Poeminister, Marina, Denise and Nan!

Corinne

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-03-18 07:27 PM

Corinne~
I like !
Sung so softly.
You hum a sweet tune.
Sounds like a duet is strumming.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

7 posted 2000-03-18 08:26 PM

Corinne does this mean your not giving out names...places..or details?

Marina

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2000-03-18 08:29 PM

I'm melting in your imagery, Corinne.

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

9 posted 2000-03-18 08:33 PM

Within your arms of shelter,
just listening to your song,
the one that always calls to me
even when I feel so alone

.... repeating the words “I love you.”

True love can come in strange ways,
from somewhere the heart does not expect,
and a true love, loves to whisper them to our heart.
You are quite the poet Corinne, and this poem whispers to my lonely heart, sweet Corinne.

Parker

jazzgal
Junior Member

since 2000-03-07

Posts 37

10 posted 2000-03-18 09:13 PM

this is such a sweet poem, yet i feel a sense of lonliness in it... bittersweet feelings, wonderfully done!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

11 posted 2000-03-19 12:17 PM

Thank you, Marge (strum, strum, strum)

Marina, I'll never tell! (grin)

Balladeer, keep on meltin, honey!

Parker,a special thank you.

Jazzgal, thankyou, yes a bit of sadness is there.

Corinne

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