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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-17 04:56 PM


Momma though I may be small
My heart is so big
Because of the love you give
But that’s not it least of all

You make me feel warm and dry,
Food when I’m hungry
Drink when I’m thirsty
Or hold me when I need to cry

I know I wear you out
Because you work so hard
Then chase me through the yard
I love you without a doubt

I’m sorry you don’t sleep right now
But I’ll make it up to you
A smile when you’re feeling blue
I’ll find a way somehow

And when I’m all grown up and gone
I know I’ll love my own baby right
Like letting her hold my finger in the night
That way, your love for me will live on

I really don’t mean to make you mad
I hope my love you plainly see,
Because everything you do is for me
And still take time to care for Dad

(A little light one from me...LOL)


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Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-17 04:58 PM


Light and sweet!
Very nice.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-03-17 08:16 PM


This was the perfect poem to start my night off with!! Thank you   I think it's great!!!
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-03-17 08:23 PM


JML-
This was so sweet hon...thanks for posting. This is exactly what I needed to read. Thanks so much for posting it.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-03-18 07:43 PM


wow i read this and forgot to reply... lol..slipping on my stalking abilites...can you ever forgive me  
you KNOW i love this...love your light sweet side...this is perfect.
a poem for sweetcheeks  
stalking you still,
your jm

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