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A vision of love
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A vision of love |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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God grants me a vision every night A vision of love I’m thankful for this glimpse into Heaven That I get each night Little undeserving me I get to see myself, dancing under the stars With the one my heart beats for He holds me close, and I can feel each beat Of his golden heart As the stars shine above But, as grateful as I am The vision is merely that Not reality... just a vision Is it a vision of what is to be, Or what can never be? Only time will tell But for now, I enjoy the visions While they last And for the rest of the night I stand under the stars And wonder how it would feel To be loved "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My vision is a fifteen year old poet with a talent beyond her years, standing under the stars, and writing beautiful verses. Well done, dear poet Liz |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, this is beautiful. A feeling most everyone of us can relate too. Did she say you were 15? Wow! michael |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Thanks for the complements, Liz and Micheal. You are going to give me a huge ego! Yes,I am a mere 15 year old. I'm a freshman, and I just got my learners permit. PLEASE don't hold it against me!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well done, Love Bug! Your vision was beautiful and excellent! Nathan |
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