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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2000-03-17 10:52 AM


How 'bout them rhyme makers,
Ain't they fine?
Puttin thoughts in ta words
And makin' them rhyme.

Them dadburn poet types
Showin' they skill,
Some use the Open Forum,
Others use a quill.

Talkin' bout love,
Talkin' bout sorrow,
Writin them now,
Readin' them tomorrow.

Them everlovin' poet writers,
Ain't they neat?
Writin them words,
With rhythm and beat.

Wanna write a ditty?
If ya get the notion,
Put it inta words,
Put your pen inta motion.

Wanna be a poet?
Don't need a ticket,
Find some words that rhyme,
And getchya self to do it!

© Copyright 2000 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 2000-03-17 10:55 AM


And here's a toast to the best of the best!! (Git yore hide outta here, Balladeer... I ain't talkin' bout you! LOL)

It's so good to see your pome righting, sweet Toe!!!

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
2 posted 2000-03-17 11:04 AM


OH,OH,OHHHHHH, Toe,

U haf ths majik bout u
I jst caint X-plain
lik ure a lepercon
nekkid in da rane!

Dancin' wit dat thingy
wiggln 2 an fro
ain't no 4 leef Klover
covern' dat ting, Bro!

Butt, dat way you put it
majik in dem songgs
maaks all da girlies wish
fer a toe dat longg!

Da Core.


Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

3 posted 2000-03-17 11:12 AM


Toe,
You have yahoo mail...

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-03-17 11:13 AM


I love them pomes
They writ so neat
My foot's a'tappin
Out that beat
I love them rhymes
I can't sit still
Thems better than
A wipper will
So will ya wipper
Me a pome
We'll drink a brew
Made here at home
Here's to Toerag
His pomes is fun
My heart's a beatin
Like a drum
Dizzie Lizzie



wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
5 posted 2000-03-17 12:00 PM


i am a writer o pomes
i filled up sixteen tomes
they are wierd and on the shelf
i wrote em all about myself

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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6 posted 2000-03-17 12:22 PM


Good "pome" toe.  Yep - doesn't take much to express the heart, that's true.  Even still, few can always manage to bring a smile to someone's face like you can  - that's truly a gift, my friend.


Michael

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
7 posted 2000-03-17 01:43 PM


Hi Toerag,

You are still making me laugh, I enjoy your pomes.

Cerenity

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
8 posted 2000-03-17 01:55 PM


Hiya Darling..  

Good to see you alive and kicking and making me laugh as well..*g*

HUSG< !signature-->

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 03-17-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2000-03-17 02:07 PM


Toe,
I stuck in my tum
And tried fo a plum
But all I got
Was a big old sunspot.
Always enjoy your minure.
Sy

Martie
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10 posted 2000-03-17 02:08 PM


Big smile from me to you...cause I likes ya!!

                

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
11 posted 2000-04-13 11:21 AM


I'm only puttin' this to the top fer one reason.....Cuz, all yall new folks here are really something else, and sometimes, some wise motivation helps ta keep ya writin'...and yall are really talented.....(and if ya compare your work to mine....your damn near genius).....welcome to all the newcomers from Toe....I hope your visit here lasts a very long time and you enjoy this place as much as I have......
suthern
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12 posted 2000-04-13 11:38 AM


Toe, sweets... if I compared my work to yours, I'd put down my pen permanently, knowing I'll never have your flair or class or wit or wisdom. *S* But I don't try to match you... I just enjoy you. *S* And I post my work instead of filing it away for years on end for one reason only... the encouragement you've given me. Thank you!
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