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Goodbye |
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teeny_greeny New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6Canada |
When I look upon these leaves They represent a fleeting breeze One that quickly came to town and turned one child's life around But now that it has changed this girl It has left her alone in an empty world Just as quickly as it came, It left with a dreary bout of rain Yet every time I touch these leaves I'll think of you my lovely breeze. |
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BluesforNarada Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 13 |
What a beautiful poem. From the heart, and just shows what a child would feel at that period in time. Short is definately beautiful in this case. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I like this much  |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem, I know someone who just recently did this to me, not a comfortable feeling, to say the least, not necessarily bad though. |
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