Open Poetry #6 |
My Only Crime !!!! |
Chico Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 67 |
My only crime !!! I know I'd die for you; if just given the chance. just hoping that I might; catch the slightest little glance. And in that last instant; before life and death. That you would be there present, To hear my last breath. And that on you lips; Would be my name. As your tear drips; on my quivering frame. That you would hold me tight; And ask me why. And tell me It's not right; That I should die. But in the wanning time; I would Smile and be tough. Knowing that my only crime; Was not loving you enough... I love you Avei... |
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teeny_greeny New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6Canada |
wow!!! that was awesome.... I could feel your love in your words...you express yourself wonderfully. Whoever you wrote this about is lucky to have you, and I hope they appreciate you as much as you do them |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very romantic..I enjoyed reading this. James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Chico, This so beautiful, with words like this it does not seem you have comitted any crime. Thank you, Cerenity |
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