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~A Lonely Knights Plea~
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~A Lonely Knights Plea~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Oh, my brave knight,My warrior, My prince, Loneliness shall leave your soul, No more pain must thee bare, For Your queen has heard thy cry, A Thousand pardons unto thy heart, Within thy arms I shall comfort thee, Alone shall only be spoken, Where you and I are, Where loves' passion is unbroken, Amidst the dreams we behold, Amidst the heavens and the stars, Amidst the loves stories to be told, For I shall wipe away thy tears, Thy heart has shown much sorrow, I shall bring thee hope for our tomorrow, Oh my love, my sweet love, Thou are not lonely no more, For your maiden awaits thee, To give thee love as never before, Lonely is not thy heart, It is set free, I answer thy call, to the heart, of Thy lonely Knights Plea. "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Unsurpassed in beauty is thy Verse Fair maid I truly feel this is worthy of great reviews for it touches ones soul indeed Where Love lives not Darkness avail's Loneheart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
To touch thy soul, I have accomplished my task, For it was written for a knight, who said thy beauty in verse is unsurpassed!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A Romantic Heart, Oh my love, my sweet love, Thou are not lonely no more, For your maiden awaits thee, this is such a lovely verse, such loveing passion and dedication to thy love, your are such a romantic poet, and your write with such flare, I really enjoy reading your verse. Parker |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, and I thought it couldn't get any better than your last poem, it's great, you are a poetic genious, I love the way that your poetry flows . L.Of.L . Tom . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is a beautful verse and I assure you it is going to touch many Knights or now wanna be Knights hearts  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Parker you do have a way with words!more than poetry itself!Thank you!!!! Your too kind! Tom:I am humbled by your compliments, That I am not worthy of... Glad it touched you!!Hoot:Thanks for the compliment!Haha...wanna be...let's have a course in knighthood...sign up sheet...... 1. 2. 3.< !signature--> "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-17-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Did You ever know that your my hero.... Your everything I wish I could be... and I can fly higher than an eagle.... Cause you are the wind beneath my wings! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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