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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Blindfold Me Blindfold me and send me walking down a road fit not for man or beast. Be it I who seeks this dangerous journey for seeing joy and happiness ringing free. Darkness sings through a victorious mission where it severs the brightness of the day, only when I concur this dreaded journey will I be graced to see the light again. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hope you get through this...smile sweetie!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well spoken my friend  "Over the winters glaciers I see the summer glow; And through the wild-piled snowdrift The warm rosebuds below." ~Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank you both, I will get through it I just need to see reality and not the optimistic dreams that fairy tales are made of. |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Short but strong,well done. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Blindfold me for I need no eyes To still see light within my heart. And Darkness bears no grim disguise That hides love waiting to depart. For there is no victory in shadow, And the Sons warmth I will always feel. For even in Darkness I know There's always light where love is real. Thank you, Gloria Michael |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lost Dreamer- Sounds like you know the way to go ... just need a little help reading the roadmap. Prayers are sent your way to help you on your journey. The blindfold will be removed by a power of light that will light your way. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I read sadness and yet strength in your poem, I like it very much. May you find peace in this journey!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This sounds very sad Lost Dreamer. Wishing you strenght and hoping you'll never lose your dreams. Hugs. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sounds like we're on the same trail...I only hope the berries I ate last night aren't poisonous... |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Very strong and nice images. I know how this can feel. And it is often true what they say about adversity aiding growth. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh my, rough times. You will be in my prayers, may God see you through them! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank you all, this was written as an inner response to a few friends sadness I always think so optimisticly that sometimes it clouds what's really happening in the world. Nothing really big, it was just my way of describing it at the moment and I suppose I treaded a little heavy on myself, but all is fine, the light never stopped shinning even though I tried to block it out for a moment. |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Need to let your friends (and yourself prehaps) dump some of their troubles and worries in the dump truck and get rid of them! Kel I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Gloria!! I'm glad the light is still shining!! They say that us optimists live longer!!  Denise |
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