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So please........GO TO HELL!!!
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So please........GO TO HELL!!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
So Please…Go To Hell! Wake up to reality And stop your dreaming Take that chip off you shoulder Because I’m a survivor, you best be believing I don’t need you anymore I can finally stand my ground You didn’t break me Self-confidence is what I’ve found You thought you could control me But I’ve got this newfound feeling So out of my way I’m going dancing on the ceiling! Don’t you know what I’m tying to say? Can’t you tell? I’ll try and be polite So please…..GO TO HELL!!! Marina Mar 16/2000 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You tell them Marina!!! I really like this one, it says what I think we've all felt like saying to someone who we have had it with at one time or another. . . Excellent!! ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marina, This is excellent. You expressed such strength!!...wish I could be that bold...lol  Thanks so much for sharing it!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You Go Girl!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I love the way you said "please" go to hell LOL...this was a great show of self power hun...keep it up!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
YOU GO GIRLFRIEND!! I really liked this one....powerful message and inspiration for us all! Great job! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Excellent!!! You let 'em know in no uncertain terms that you are strong!!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really cool...I loved the last few lines..."I'll try and be polite...so please...go to hell"!!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, thank you. Ex's have a way of bringing out the best in us sometimes! Butterflies: thanks,but it took me a long time to get here. Ruth,thanks devina: thank you and believe me I will! Amy and Wildchild: thanks for you comments. James: thanks, the last line is my favourite too! Marina |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marina, I pitty the man who lost such a gem as you. Strong poem....Great! INclan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
INclan, your very sweet. Thank you very much for your compliments. Marina |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WOOHOO!YES!!!! Congratulations! You have arrived! Great sentiment! hehe |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Doreen: thank you, you have no idea how good it feels to finally speeak these words! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina---not just Ex's-- ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, this is so blunt, some guys just don't get the message. Stay strong. James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Marina- if anyone knows how good it feels to speak those words... 'tis moi! Again, congratulations! I always feel some kind of comeraderie and elation when I see a woman finally empowered by her own sense of who she is... I know you are proud (as you should be) and probably relieved... feeling this, then writing it is a definitive step toward what I know will be your bright tomorrow!! Claim it!  -doreen"Life is short... Let's be honest with each other- doreen peri" |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven your prabably right. James,your right some guys don't...parcilarly this one. But that's Ok , he doesn't know who he's dealing with now! Doreen, thank again for replying. I'm sorry you had to go through a similiar situlation. However like you said it feels great to be strong and finally stand up for yourself. Marina |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marina: It's a bit like giving birth, such a relief when it's all over... HUGS |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
RainbowGirl your prabably right. I don't have any kids but if giving birth is this painful, I can do just about anything! Marina |
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