Open Poetry #6 |
Fingers in soft chest curls... |
Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Her eyes light upon her love shining beauty of a new born star The signs of their passion still evident in her tossled hair and flushed cheeks secret smiles playing upon her sweetly sated lips... Evening memories play over and over scenes of vivid erotica evidence still fresh upon her ravished body... Pressing against him his warmth an intoxicating comfort as she trails fingers in soft chest curls breathing him in with kisses of awakening shivering delights at the aroma of him upon her flesh... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This whole poem is wonderfully intoxicating! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Thank you Beki! It was a wonderfully intoxicating time...*grin* Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was wondefully erotic...may we continue into adult???...you could lengthen this into something wonderful...ummm...ok...I'm shutting up!!! Very intoxicating indeed!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Oh no! Please don't challenge me...I'm just a newbie!! *LOL* Actually I had shortened it a bit...to make it a little less racey for this forum... ) Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
An apt name Breathe~ after reading this... you might have a wee bit of trouble with your breathing. Nicely done. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
gee this brings back distant memories I wonder what might happen if I got my wife to read this poem Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Mike...Thank you! My breathing steady only for the moment...* ) Rex...well...maybe make some new intoxicating moments? I've got my fingers crossed for you...*smiling* Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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