Open Poetry #6 |
Her Eyes |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Her eyes speak to me with love Two beautiful pools of blue Showing me an angel sent from above With skin of fairest hue I can see the pain they hide And feel the tears that have been shed But through the pain I can see the beauty reside A beauty dying, that needs to be fed Spring forth beautiful one From behind the mask that you've hidden Show us your eyes of blue and hair like the sun And of your pain be ridden ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Sven, glad you rehashed this one May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, well,well, well...there is another side to you! Who know....or maybe It's because your always showing me your bad side! I loved this....very tender and sweet. Marina |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
The windows of to our soul is through our eyes put into a poem with care. One word: lovely. And all those other synonyms of the word 'beautiful' too. Nice poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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